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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using player knowledge to make decisions unfairly
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: forcing actions against other players
    Status: Denied

One dark night in Atlas, Aelin Galathynius was given a second chance at life by a Jonathan Mills after being chased out of Elven lands by the nations who signed the Treaty of Thales. Jonathan, a simple human farmer who wished to repent for the murders of another Snow Elf family, gave her a refuge until she had recovered her strength to continue her journey.  In order to escape from the massacre Aelin decided to travel while undergoing strict military training and become one of the greatest assassins known to Haelun'or. She chose to train in secret as an assassin, her first kill on that same night in the hopes of one day reclaiming her homeland. 

Character Name: Aelin Galathynius
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Golden hair, turquoise eyes with a ring of gold around the pupil, slender, usually wears cloaks to conceal her daggers
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! After reviewing your application, I sadly have to deny it. Overall it was a pretty good read, but there are a few things that have to be changed in order to be accepted on the server. Before reapplying, I would suggest registering on our forums so the next time you apply, if you make any mistakes you'll be given a 24 hour period to make edits, rather than getting automatically denied. The changes necessary are as followed:

  • In your backstory, it looks like it says she has become one of the greatest assassins known to Haelun'or. Considering your character is new, they cannot be seen as such, as it includes a functioning and present player base on the server. I would suggest perhaps editing that to her wanting to become one of the best, or something of the sort.
  • Your 'Interesting Facts' section must contain at least one fault, to provide proper depth to your character.

You can reapply to the server in three hours. Once more I would suggest you register a forum account, as it makes this process much easier. Below are two links that can aid you in the application process, and if you require any help further, please feel free to PM me directly:

 

Snow Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Snow_Elves

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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