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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is a stategy, action used in a game that uses external factors to affect the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a style of iteracting with games usally with video games, boardgames and roleplaying
    Status: Denied

his parents were killed by orcs so he wants revenge

Character Name: Nate
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 200
Physical Description: looks like a human but is in disguise
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it. Though plagiarism is strictly forbidden within the LoTC community and it would be denied as well even with an account in place.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to be plagiarism another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ You can't have a dark elf being in a disguise that makes him look like a human. There are a few ways to make him look like a human but that you'll have to do in character. 

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts, though I'd recommend that you expand your interesting facts to full sentences.

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

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