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Atilla Ragnar

By Atilla Ragnar

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    Discord: LelBoiPotato #5766
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is used when a player say out of character to a friend or somebody that he knows what is happening
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying of unrealistic or godly actions ex of pg : John slices the orc in half with a single swing of his sword
    fair rp : John attempts to slice the orc
    Status: Denied

When i was born my parents were scared and happy at the same time , that was a rough time but luckily i was safe until i was i don't know 5 or something . It was a very dammed day , i were in my home playing with my wood horse , but then i heard screaming , i looked out the window and saw barbarians trying to take the land , my father had to go to fight , when he left he told us to hide. We got in a good corner in our house and we were safe . The war was like 30 days , but luckily my father came back . I was so happy to see him , but in 7 months all had changed , my father died by falling of a cliff and my mom died by the plague .  Until i was 13 i lived on my own i learnt how to shoot with a bow  . I was wandering in the woods and saw some guards patrolling there and i tried to hide they got me but they asked 

"Are you the son of Magne Ragnar?" i said yes they again said "Come with us we will take care of you (in a good way)" when we got to their camp they gave me some bear meat and i liked it until i was 16 the took care of me they learned me a lot of things like how to be in total silence when hunting . When i was 19 i left and made a small camp . In that camp i started training  with an axe i found randomly in the forest . That axe was not made to cut trees , it was an axe from the war , it was the perfect weapon . When i was 22 i left my camp and i started to explore i got in Norland. It was the perfect land with the perfect leader which it was the only royal leader i have faith in His Majesty, Halvar Edvardsson . 

 

Character Name: Atilla Ragnar
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Atilla is a character which is 6.4 height with a purple robe his face cannot be seen
Roleplay Scenario:

-I want to elevate my place in the society 

-Cand you make me a tour?

*hands some leftover money*

-Yes . Says the gentleman

-Ok this is gonna be very good

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Please improve both your powergaming and metagaming definitions. You can find more information on them here.

- Please avoid using common tropes in your character biography! Your family being killed by barbarians/orcs/whatever is commonly used in applications.

- Your character being skilled at using an axe at the age of 16 to the extent they are would be considered powergaming.

- Please add lore references to your biography! This could be anything from a religion to a settlement name. You can look at the wiki pages for Nations and Charters, Races, or our current map, Almaris.

- In your physical description, you mention your character is 7'5. Humans are between 4'8 and 6'4, please change this accordingly. If you need to reference the lore, you can find it here.

- Your personality needs you to have a significant disadvantage. Please add one.

- Your character drive needs to be at least two sentences long! It must also link in to your character biography.

- Your character fears should be at least two sentences.

- Your roleplay scenario is too short! Please expand it to be at least 4 sentences, including at least one action and dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you have a look around the wiki! WIKI

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