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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you let your character know information that it's never been given.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you decide how other players react to a certain event. For example, "She punches the player and they collapse to the ground, unconscious."
    Status: Denied

Kyra was born and brought up in Sutica. Her parents, who were decently well off financially, weren't very involved in her upbringing, instead giving her a caretaker. She had no friends or siblings to play with, and she was lonely. This made her wanting of her parents attention, which is what drew her to dark comedy and later entertainment as a whole. When she was in her early teens, she saved up and bought herself a fiddle, and she'd play it in the nights. She told her parents she wanted to be a musician, which completely stunned them as they had expected her to go into something science-y. Out of anger, they made her leave the city she had grown to love, but not before she was able to steal a decent amount from them to support her well. She ran away to Gladewynn, where she's been able to make an average amount of money from playing her fiddle. She also got extra money, when necessary, from doing errands from people in taverns that paid well. Overall, a good life, although she's never been able to trust people fully since her parents.


Character Name: Kyra Klostra
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Kyra has purple hair, cyan eyes, she's 5 feet 9 inches, you can tell she trains when she can, and is most often recognized for her midnight blue cloak
Roleplay Scenario:

"Why hello, good sir! Can it be all of the above?" Kyra replies.  To be honest, she didnt really know why she was there. Kyra just felt- drawn to the place. It was bustling with energy, and seemed like the perfect place for the entertainer to find a crowd. It also seemed like there'd be enough trouble to make a living off of.

 

"Now, would you by any chance know where the nearest tavern is?"

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long!

  • Gladewynn is a place on a past continent that your character would not have been alive for, so I recommend editing this part of your Character Biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like! https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and keep in mind that your character cannot have pale skin as she is a Wood Elf! For more information, check out this wiki page here. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves

  • Your character cannot have purple hair unless it is dyed - just a small little side note!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message teawithsarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at teawithsarah#0808

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above! 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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