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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: S҉a҉i҉l҉o҉r҉X҉X҉M҉o҉o҉n҉#7998
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: an example of meta-gaming *your friend informed you on a messaging app that there is a duel going between him and another player in the city of the person who is dueling him and asks you get online to help in which you do* this is meta-gaming because your
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: forcing an action for example "jake killed john with one hit of his sword to the heart" also being unrealistic for example*lisa the young 2 year old made a piece of clothing with only one needle and thread* and also having an op(over powered or god like)
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.”Well dear sir, i’m here to presume a project i have! You see this project requires me to go to this absolutely splendid place i see before me. I am also possibly going to live here it’s a better place than where i was before.”

*I would mutter to my self while i would bend down to pick up my luggage*

“Anyways i hope to gather some resources as well and make money for a new life here... “

*she would say her good bye’s to the gentleman and slowly walk away*

Character Name: Orian lÿnn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: light red eyes very light blue hair red skinny torn dress red vines on the side of head earnings gloves and boots
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Dinochad

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • The definitions for Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming both need to be rewritten as they are incorrect. Please use some resources to research and correct them → Here!
  • Biography needs to include two references from the lore, and there needs to be less ‘mature’ statements in there. Keep it pg-13! You can use the Lore Wiki for such! 
  • Physical description of character isn’t lore appropriate. High Elves do not have Red eyes or Blue hair. – look at lore page for High Elves → Here!
  • Personality Traits/Quirks shouldn’t have ‘Seductive’- this is a pg-13 server
  • Roleplay Scenario needs to be rewritten, less suggestive- this is a pg-13 server. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @Dinochan#1825 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Dinochad

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Biography still needs another lore reference! Please don't be afraid to use the Lore Wiki
  • The Physical Description still isn’t up to the lore standards, please read about High Elves on their Lore Page Here

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @Dinochan#1825 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Dinochad

 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Didn’t change the second pending’s faults, which were a character look that’s against Lore. And the Biograhy needed another lore reference! 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Dinochan#1825, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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