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EllaMagic

By EllaMagic

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Necromacy
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Weapons
    Status: Denied

Adventure and to learn to not think of my dark past

Character Name: Ashihari Lavellan
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: very pale Skin her Hair is very long and a Beautiful white blond her eyes are a really pretty green color and she like wear Pink dress
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Myleres

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There are quite a few issues with your application. These are as follows:

➤ Both your powergaming and metagaming definitions are incorrect. Make sure you refresh yourself on these terms by reading our wiki, then rewrite them in your own words!

➤ When responding to the roleplay scenario, make sure to include both an action and some dialogue. How would your character respond in the given situation? 

➤ Please make two references to the server’s lore in your biography. This can be the mentioning of a place or event that has happened. Our lore can be found on our wiki.

➤ The backstory of having ‘orcs kill your parents’ is incredibly overdone and cliche. Try to spice up your character’s background a little bit.

➤ Try and clean up the grammar and sentence structure within your application a little bit. Being able to communicate effectively is crucial on LOTC, and will directly influence yours and other players experiences.

 

You may reapply at any time, assuming the above changes are made. If you’re needing any assistance, check out the New Player Discord or reach out to me directly at Lumii#0001.

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