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EllaMagic

By EllaMagic

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Necromacy
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Weapons
    Status: Denied

Ashihari was born to a small family her Parents were both Snow elves like her and they lived in a small house in a large village in the snow lands she had a swell life she always would go outside to play with her friends and older brother who were all snow elves. 

but one day when she turn 4 years old all that change and for the good one day when she was 4 years old she was playing with her friends and older brother when there village was actakked by Orcs and Trolls bother Her Parents and older brother Died at the hands for the orcs and before they could kill her to she fled and runway from home and didn't go back because the orcs would find her there Again so now that brings us to now she is still on the run and now is trying to find away to fight back and save her and any other Sevorivers  and that's her sad and Tragic and Dark Backstory she is to scared to telll anyone.

Character Name: Ashihari Lavellan
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: very pale Skin her Hair is very long and a Beautiful white blond her eyes are a really pretty green color and she like wear Pink dress
Roleplay Scenario:

Adventure and to learn to not think of my dark past

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winterblessing

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There are quite a few issues with your application. These are as follows:

➤ Both your powergaming and metagaming definitions are incorrect. Make sure you refresh yourself on these terms by reading our wiki, then rewrite them in your own words!

➤ When responding to the roleplay scenario, make sure to include both an action and some dialogue. How would your character respond in the given situation? 

➤ Please make two references to the server’s lore in your biography. This can be the mentioning of a place or event that has happened. Our lore can be found on our wiki.

➤ The backstory of having ‘orcs kill your parents’ is incredibly overdone and cliche. Try to spice up your character’s background a little bit.

➤ Try and clean up the grammar and sentence structure within your application a little bit. Being able to communicate effectively is crucial on LOTC, and will directly influence yours and other players experiences.

 

You may reapply at any time, assuming the above changes are made. If you’re needing any assistance, check out the New Player Discord or reach out to me directly at Lumii#0001.

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