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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I would say that Metagaming would be a result of breaking character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is like making your character a go
    Status: Denied

Hore Spiritdance once live a happy and gentle life with his son "Star" and his wife "Feather". 
After a long day of working the fields, with the other men of the village, and comes home to 
see his wife dead on the ground with a scrap of parchment on the main support beam of the 
house, Reading - There all dead catch me if you can

                                             - Jkr


Character Name: Hore Spiritdance
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 234
Physical Description: My character is gentle the eyes but is a monster underneath. He hides half his face under half of the hood of this tattered green hooded jacket.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Although this can be contributed to a quick fix, I have to halt you here. Primarily for the definition of meta-gaming and power-gaming. Although what you have is a good measure to know, it isn't exactly correct. I just wish you to fix up the definition and expand on it for as best as you can. You can find an expanded range to assist you across all media of the internet, or scour through our own wiki which explains it here; http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/ . 

 

Biography, alright. So your biography is confusing for me it has been written in a way which I am unsure if it's done IC or OOC'ly. Despite this I am missing the story of your character, if you can expand upon this and give me some history of them (How he met the wife before her demise?) and also include a piece of server lore, that'll be wondering. You can find server lore within the same link above, either include; time, city, location which has been accepted on the server and you'll be good to go!

 

With this little fix-up you'll be swinging on the server in no time which we'll be happy to company you to join.  If you do however need any assistance you can message me on the forums here or go to the new player discord found here: https://discord.gg/uCwe7rv , alternatively if you just wish to private message me my discord ID is here: ttwesten#9293

 

Thank you for applying and I do hope you can fix the application up within 24 hours for when i'll review the application next. If you want a faster review, please don't fret to message me.

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