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Kaelen
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I have always avoided power-gaming in role play by making characters with problems already. Having a flawed character is important to character growth in a role play scenario. Allow your character to have problems for growth.
    Focus on building a personal character story.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming can cause unfair advantages. It disrupts role play because it traps your character into not having a personal growth/story to develop from. Using OOC can cause an immersion breaking moment. It can even cause an non organic story line to develop that you will have to lie to make sense.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Kaelen
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: 6'2 dark black medium length Mohawk to the side Weighting 185 Purple eyes. Dark black robe over a blue tunic and dark brown pants with black boots.
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Character Backstory: Kaelen "The Moon-Blind" Velnar

The Origins Kaelen was born in the subterranean depths of the old Mali’ker territories, raised under the strict discipline of the Sentinels—warriors sworn to protect the Ker from the horrors of the Deep and the corruption of the Void. Unlike his peers, Kaelen possessed a peculiar "sensitivity" to the Moon's phases; he claimed he could hear the "whisper of the tides" even miles underground.

The Tragedy Years ago, during a Voidal breach in a remote mining outpost, Kaelen was tasked with holding the line. He chose to save a group of civilian refugees over securing a sacred Lunar Relic. The relic was shattered, and while the people lived, Kaelen was branded "Moon-Blind"—a metaphorical exile. He wasn't banished from the city, but he was stripped of his rank and told he had "turned his back on the light of Luara to chase shadows."

Current Motivation Kaelen now wanders the surface of Aevos (or the current map) as a mercenary and monster hunter. He seeks to prove that protecting the people of Malin is the truest form of worship, even if the High Priesthood disagrees. He carries a shattered fragment of the relic he failed to protect, embedded in the hilt of his blade.

 

Roleplay Scenario: The Silver and the Silt

Setting: A dimly lit tavern on the outskirts of a bustling human city or a quiet corner of Nor’Asath. The air is thick with the smell of pipeweed and stale ale.

The Setup: You (as Kaelen) are sitting in the corner, meticulously cleaning a curved obsidian dagger. A young, frantic Mali'a (Wood Elf) or human traveler approaches your table. They’ve heard rumors of a "shadow-skulker" who knows how to track things that don't want to be found.

The Hook: A local village has been losing livestock—and now a child—to a creature that only hunts when the moon is a sliver in the sky. The locals think it’s a ghost; you suspect it’s a Voidal Horror that slipped through the cracks.

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