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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: lurburk#5434
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Learning information from ouside sources such as talking to another player OOC to learn something about another character or event that happened in the world
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having a character who physically or mentally cant do a task be able to perform the task just to save himself in a situation that wouldnt benefit him
    Status: Denied

Trilreak was born in a cave next to the city of San'Kala. Since the day he was born he was raiding and pillaging local villages for food and gold. One day a raid went bad for Trilreak and his band of goblins when an elf patrol responded to the attack. The elves killed off all the goblins except for Trilreak and another goblin by the name of Olg. After that day Trilreak and Olg wanted there revenge on the elves who killed there friends.  So the two goblins planned there attack on the patrol why sneaking into there camp at night and poisoning there food. All was going well for the pair of goblins when a guard spotted them and fired an arrow into Olgs back killing him. Worried about being killed himself Trilreak fled into the night to escape the elf patrol. After running for what seemed like hours Trilreak stopped to plan his next move. Now alone Trilreak continued his ways of finding gold either by pillaging or stealing it from travelers. 

Character Name: Trilreak
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Small Goblin with tattered clothing with a few missing teeth from fighting other goblins
Roleplay Scenario:

*looks at the well dressed human nervously*

“ Im looking for a new place to call home with other goblins and orcs”

*waits on humans responce*

“can you tell me of the local goblin settlements?”

*waits on humans responce*

“can you point me in the direction of the settlements?”

*waits on humans responce*

*Walks off quickly not wanting the conversation to continue*

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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

  • Your Character Biography appears to be very well written and wonderfully explained, however, you have not included the mandatory (1) lore piece that must be within the biography, I’d recommend you to look over the LotC Wiki for some assistance!
  • Your Character Traits/Quirks seems to be good, though, I’d recommend adding a better negative trait to your application.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario appears to be missing an action to go along with the text; It must be both a text and action emote. 

    You can also join our     New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns.  
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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

  • Your Character Biography appears to be well written, however, I regret to inform you that the location that you have included- ‘San'Kala’ happens to be an outdated lore piece that is not allowed within the applications. I’d recommend you to look over the LotC Wiki for more recent locations on the front page!

    You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 
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Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.
 

  • Your Character Biography appears to be well written, however, I regret to inform you that the location that you have included- ‘San'Kala’ happens to be an outdated lore piece that is not allowed within the applications. I’d recommend you to look over the LotC Wiki for more recent locations on the front page!

    You can also join our     New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.
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