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By lurubrk

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Learning information from ouside sources such as talking to another player OOC to learn something about another character or event that happened in the world
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having a character who physically or mentally cant do a task be able to perform the task just to save himself in a situation that wouldnt benefit him
    Status: Denied

Trilreak was born in a cave next to the city of San'Strok. Since the day he was born he was raiding and pillaging local villages for food and gold. One day a raid went bad for Trilreak and his band of goblins when an elf patrol responded to the attack. The elves killed off all the goblins except for Trilreak and another goblin by the name of Olg. After that day Trilreak and Olg wanted there revenge on the elves who killed there friends. So the two goblins planned there attack on the patrol why sneaking into there camp at night and poisoning there food. All was going well for the pair of goblins when a guard spotted them and fired an arrow into Olgs back killing him. Worried about being killed himself Trilreak fled into the night to escape the elf patrol. After running for what seemed like hours Trilreak stopped to plan his next move. Now alone Trilreak continued his ways of finding gold either by pillaging or stealing it from travelers.

Character Name: Trilreak
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Small Goblin with tattered clothing with a few missing teeth from fighting other goblins
Roleplay Scenario:

*looks at the well dressed human nervously*

“ Im looking for a new place to call home with other goblins and orcs”

*waits on humans responce*

“can you tell me of the local goblin settlements?”

*waits on humans responce*

“can you point me in the direction of the settlements?”

*waits on humans responce*

*Walks off quickly not wanting the conversation to continue*

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SoulReapingWolf

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions need work, I also suggest you use examples to show you understand the concepts
  • Your biography is lacking a few things, make sure you have at least 10 complete sentences and three lore mentions that do belong to the server, I’ll include a list of links that might be useful for that. San'Strok  does not exist in the server so maybe use the following info to include lore into your bio.
  • Physical Description:
    • This section of your application is for you to describe how your character looks like using this space to let people know how you picture them in your head.
  • Your personality traits should be complete sentences and should follow the following format
    • Positive Traits (Strengths, achievements, skills, feats)
    • Neutral Traits (Likes, Dislikes, Quirks, Hobbies, Favorite Food, Interesting information)
    • Negative Traits (Fears, Weaknesses)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

Your time limit has expired. Whenever you make a new application remember to take into account my previous comments.

On 11/13/2019 at 3:50 PM, SoulReapingWolf said:

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

qgcl0pt.png

For the following reasons,

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions need work, I also suggest you use examples to show you understand the concepts
  • Your biography is lacking a few things, make sure you have at least 10 complete sentences and three lore mentions that do belong to the server, I’ll include a list of links that might be useful for that. San'Strok  does not exist in the server so maybe use the following info to include lore into your bio.
  • Physical Description:
    • This section of your application is for you to describe how your character looks like using this space to let people know how you picture them in your head.
  • Your personality traits should be complete sentences and should follow the following format
    • Positive Traits (Strengths, achievements, skills, feats)
    • Neutral Traits (Likes, Dislikes, Quirks, Hobbies, Favorite Food, Interesting information)
    • Negative Traits (Fears, Weaknesses)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application. 

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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