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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is a term used in role-playing games, which describes a player's use of real-life knowledge concerning the state of the game to determine their character's actions, when said character has no relevant knowledge or awareness under the circumstan
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: owergaming (or power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations suc
    Status: Denied

Arthur is a merchant descendant of the Allard line, and the first child of Adrien Allard. His loyalty to his family, and its traditionally militant nature, have limited his mercantile success in the past, though due to recent success and a desire for ambition, Arthur has begun to expand his sphere of influence. With the support of his grandfather he has begun his merchant ventures. While growing up Arthur to become a merchant, but because of his families militant background he was pressed into service. This caused a decent amount of strife between Arthur and his father Adrien, causing him to be more loyal towards his grandfather Byrant.

 

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History of house Allard

Foundation of Rouena | 936 anno domini

Rouena was founded in 936 in the Principality of Relouria, founded by the progenitor of House Allard. Having served House Halcourt loyally for many years, House Allard was permitted a barony under them an honor they would never forget. It was a place for scholars and all people of sound mind and held universities, observatories and other places of learning.


The Cadet’s War | 1397 anno domini

Following the tanist election the chancellor of Relouria was shot and killed. Serving their liege lords loyally, House Allard attempted to aide the Halcourts in stealing the throne of Relouria, leading to years of war. Abandoning their peaceful roots the Allards took up arms and rode to war.


 

Fall of the Principality | 1436 anno domini

Following years of internal turmoils, Relouria was in ruins and were easy pickings for foreign aggressors. While House Allard liege lords and most of their servants fled the country, House Allard stubbornly stayed behind to defend their homeland. Rouena was lost, then Relouria and soon after Athera.

 

Orenian Assimilation | 1450 anno domini

In the mid fifteenth century, the Relourian population was mostly integrated into Orenian society, mostly in the Savoyard region. House Allard had mostly disappeared into obscurity.

 

A Young Squire | 1577 anno domini

By 1577 a young eleven year old squire by the name of Bryant Allard had a run in with a seasoned veteran of Legio I Ioannes, Sylvestre II Halcourt. Squired by Ser Edwyn Harwyn in the ways of the sword and taught by Ser Sylvestre Halcourt in the ways of the pen he was determined to bring his house back to glory.

 

The Loyal | 1587 - 1589 anno domini

For having served in the legion for a decade, having reached the rank of Decurion and for serving as Auditor-General in the Imperial Administration, Bryant Allard was granted Knighthood by his Imperial Majesty Philip I Horen and later married to Lady Aliyah Brawm in the year 1589.

 

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Family tree of house Allard

~ Members ~

Older men declare war, but it is the youth who must fight and die.

—  Simon Allard, ᴄɪʀᴄᴀ 1397

 

  • ♂ Bryant Allard, patriarch of House Allard and eldest living member of the House. (Played by Youngie5500) [85~]

  • ♀ Aliyah Grace Allard, matriarch of House Allard, wife to Bryant, born to House Brawm. (Played by Violino) [82~]

    • ♂ Adrien Allard, first son of Bryant and Aliyah and the current heir. (Played by Skuke101) [62~]

      • ♂ Arthur Allard, first son of Adrien, grandson of Bryant and Aliyah Allard. (Played by Lyricstorm) [23~]

    • ♂ Brayden Allard, second son of Bryant and Aliyah and second in line. (Played by Lhindir) [61~]

    • ♀ Alison Grace Allard, first daughter of Bryant and Aliyah. (Played by The_Chewy53) [60~]
       

  • ♂ Jean-Marie Allard, cousin to Bryant Allard and older brother to Joseph Allard (Played by Saarty1) [81~]

  • ♂ Joseph Allard, cousin to Bryant Allard and younger brother to Jean-Marie Allard. (Played by 7II) [82~]

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(referred by lyonharted & oliver, due to them being friends. The references to lore are based on their faction and associated territory)


Character Name: Arthur Allard
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: An unassuming man of average build, with short brown hair, and white complexion. His garb appears drab, but it is practical and sturdy.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been set to Pending.

-Please reword your metagaming definition to better fit with the concept on an RP server.

-Your powergaming definition is currently incorrect.

-Please add more lore references into your character's bio. Lore can be found both upon the forums and the wiki.

-Please add personal incidents and/or important events to your character's bio.

-Interesting Facts can be expanded upon to explain why perhaps Arthur is considered disgraced.

 

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Your Application has unfortunately been denied for the following reason:

 

- Your powergaming definition is plagiarised. When writing out definitions please make sure to put them in your own words. We need to know you understand these definitions enough to know when you need to apply them in game. 

Often these definitions can also be very misleading, please check the definitions on the LotC Wiki.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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