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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Breaking the rules or doing something against what the game lets you do.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Trying to achieve your goal, to the point of not participating correctly.
    Status: Denied

Raised in a camp meant to train soldiers at the age of three, living with abuse, pain, and neglect until the age of 15. Being kicked out because of the fact that she was simply “too short” she then ended up in a place she does not know and attempts to figure out what to do. She discovers art and turns it into a full-time job.


Character Name: Kyra
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 18|:|Human|:|Height: 156cm|:|Black Eyes|:|Black Hair|:|Button Nose|:|Large Eyes|:|Slim Figure|:|Small Scar On Left Cheek|:|Light Brown Skin
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but can use some help.

  1. The first thing is your metagame and powergame definition could use a little bit of help. I think you should take a look at the wiki and apply that knowledge to your application. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. Your biography actually has none of the servers lore on it. I would request you take a look at the wiki and add some of the servers lore. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  3. your interesting facts are just one word I would request you take a look at them and make them into sentences.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few  changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

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