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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I would most likely disengage and find a way to leave the situation while remaining in character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It brings the players out of the immersion and can disrupt a growing plot. Ultimately making a good story fall flat or leaving plot holes.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Vuronia Moselle
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Ms.Moselle is 5'7 in tall. She has green eyes, long wavy black hair, and tan skin; doesn't care for Elf beauty standards She's dressed in a white gown
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))




"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

 

(Vuronia paused for a long moment, collecting her words before speaking to dispel the stutter. "My apologies, I expected this to be empty. You said you were expecting me?" Vuronia questions, pausing before her next words. She doesn't sit, nor glance at the cushion, she simply continues. "I didn't know there were tales of me farther west. If you must know, I'm searching for a quieter place to reside. I cannot stand the rash and the noisy. I'm sure you can understand my concern. I lived in a villa that was quite lovely but with the addition of letting in travelers I just-" Vuronia cuts her self off before she runs on a tangent, she swallows and continues. "You'll have to excuse me, I've come a long way. And given the..." She takes another pause, her hands that were previously resting at her side now clasped Infront of her. She continues, "Pleasant smell, it would be lovely to stay but I hate overstaying my welcome. I trust I've satisfied your curiosity, yes? Do you not get many elves this time of year?" Vuronia says, her question bordering on a tasteless remark. She blinks slowly waiting for her response before ultimately leaving the tent.)

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:


 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Your response is not quite right. The question is asking you how you would avoid powergaming in your roleplay, as opposed to other people's powergaming. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! High Elves tend to have lighter skin tones due to the lore behind why they're the way they are. Additionally, they do not have dark hair. I would advise denoting Vuronia is partially Wood Elf or a Dark Elf. Please refer to the Racial Hub WIKI page for more information.

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire) or by /msg Evonpire in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Your application has been

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Due to: Time’s up!

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord, if you want to ask for any help from us!

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