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Caleb Athal
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: SparkleArse#0723
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using common sense and/or life experiences during RP and using it to their advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: being op in RP
    Status: Denied

From the age of 70, Caleb, has always been taught that life has no real rules no matter how hard everyone tries. Morals are fickle things that is judged upon from person to person. Life is disgusting and so are the people that inhabit it. As Caleb grew older he saw how free the world is, how full of life it is and how cruel people are behind their masks. At the age of 140 he lost someone close to him, he knows they left for a reason and he respects that all he hopes is that one day he will cross pass with them, even through the life of combat.


Character Name: Caleb Athal
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Long black hair, with pale green eyes and pale skin. he looks like a young adult but don't let looks deceive you, he's well over 185 years old.
Roleplay Scenario:

i would look at him up and down, smirking as I lift my head to the side and finally speak. " I'm sorry did you say something?"  and as he tried to repeat himself i would cut him off and say "no, you don't have to repeat yourself i was ignoring you the first time, I am looking for some adventure, something that might make my life quite entertaining if you can say."

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are not quite right. For more information, reference this wiki page.

- Your biography is lacking a lore reference. Please look at our wiki, where you can find pages for nations and charters or for our current map, Almaris.

- In your biography, you mention your character is 140/185 years old. This does not line up with your character age, nor can your character be over 100 years old if they're an elf.

- Your character description doesn't match up with your race. Reference the lore for High Elves here.

- Your character fear isn't long enough. It should be at least two sentences long.

- Your roleplaying definition should include whether you've roleplayed before.

- Your roleplaying scenario should be in third person and only control your own character.
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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