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Math_pro368

By Math_pro368

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Mathpro_368#2572
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you acquire information that aren't related to your character, for exaple: if I read in the wiki what is dark magic, but my character is better in deity magic, and from the day to the night my character knows everything about dark magic.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you use very extreme emotes to describe something, for example: at one boss fight, my character decapitate the boss head and shows it to indicate the victory.
    Status: Denied

Matheus is a Heartlander that was born in Providence, at the Holy Orenian Empire, and believe in the Church of the Canon, his parents were Jacob and Kassandra. Until the 15, Matheus had a peaceful life in Providence, but when he was 15, a big war started, and Matheus' father needed to serve the Empire as a warrior, but he never came back, after the war ended, Kassandra died of depression, and from the 15 until now, he served as a warrior to the Holy Orenian Empire.

Character Name: Matheus
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Matheus is tall, has short brown hair and dark brown eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

I would respond:

"I know you?"

And continium:

"I'm Matheus, and I came to serve the Holy Orenian Empire, so, can you get out of my way, because I'm very hungry and I need to eat something fast"

So the "well-dressed gentleman would say his name and say:

"Do you want food? I can show you food"

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord crines#2975. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Suicidium to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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