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Matthew9932

By Matthew9932

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: ignore them
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Because its Private, and such info we cant tell everyone
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Herbert Greg
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: They just have a fully white misterious skin with a (optifine) white cape
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
 

"My village got attacked and my family got captured, i ran away as fast as i could, now im here" 

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HogoBojo

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are not quite what we're looking for. Please redo these & lengthen your answers. If you're not sure what Metagaming & Powergaming is, please find our definitions below.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Physical Description is not coherent with your selected race! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards & doesn't match your character's race. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @hogobojo. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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