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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: Toti#4572
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Respect player choice – Never force outcomes on other players. Instead of “I knock you out instantly”, write “I swing my fist toward your jaw, trying to knock you out”. This lets the other player decide how their character reacts.
    Stay realistic – Base your character’s actions on their abilities, limits, and the setting. A regular human shouldn’t suddenly jump across rooftops like a superhero unless the lore supports it.

    Emote attempts, not guarantees – Use words like tries, attempts, aims, goes to instead of absolute outcomes.
    Play fair with consequences – If your character makes mistakes, gets injured, or is put in a tough spot, accept it. Losing sometimes makes roleplay richer.
    Communicate OOC (out of character) – If a scene might affect someone’s character in a big way, check with them first. Collaboration keeps things fun and fair.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Unfair advantage – If your character suddenly “knows” something they shouldn’t, it removes the challenge and suspense from the story. For example, using OOC info about an enemy’s hiding spot gives you an edge you didn’t earn IC (in character).

    Destroys immersion – Roleplay is about staying true to your character’s perspective. When meta happens, it feels artificial, and the story stops being believable.
    Undermines trust – Other players may feel cheated or frustrated if you use outside info to manipulate outcomes. It can break the collaborative spirit of roleplay.
    Weakens story quality – Surprises, mysteries, and conflicts lose impact if players already know the answers and act on them. The plot becomes shallow.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Tharion Elensar
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Tharion Elensar is a tall, silver-haired Sindarin elf with sharp grey-green eyes and a lean, enduring build.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example:  Tharion Elensar steps carefully across the damp, uneven ground, the scent of rotted wood and wet moss clinging to his cloak. His grey-green eyes take in the shacks and cabins, noting every shadow, every movement. Ducking into the tattered tent, he allows the flickering candlelight to wash over him, casting long shadows across the worn fabric.

At the back of the tent, the old hag lifts her head, her gaze locking onto his. “What brings you to this dingy town?” she begins, then pauses, eyes narrowing as if seeing through him. “Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit. Tell me your story.”

Tharion lowers himself onto the cushion, keeping his posture straight yet relaxed, hands resting lightly on his knees. “I have walked many forests and shadowed paths,” he begins, his voice calm, carrying the subtle cadence of elven speech. “I seek knowledge, and perhaps guidance. The darkness grows in these lands, and I have felt its stirrings even before I arrived. My path… has always been to watch, to protect, and to learn. I came here because something tells me this place holds answers I cannot find alone.”

He inclines his head slightly, eyes meeting the hag’s with a mixture of respect and quiet determination. “I will tell you more, if you are willing to listen.”

 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Hiya! I'm afraid a lot of your application had been found either moderate or high confidence for AI usage. I went through your definitions and backstory and each one had come up quite highly- on LotC we're looking for authenticity, and directing this application to AI usage is not what we desire. Feel free to reapply when you are ready.



 

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