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Fuji M

By Fuji M

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: meek#3639
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: reading a wiki page for magic, helping friends because they messaged you like "someone is at our base" and you didn't find out yourself.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: ignoring the effects of things like for example when someone uses magic on you and you don't care or doing godly things that you couldn't do.
    Status: Denied

my name is "Fuji" i am 18, i get bullied and don't have a lot of friends, my parents loved me a lot but i never told them i was being bullied.

one day i finally was done the bully attacked me but this time i didn't tell. i fought back.

Character Name: Fuji
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6'2" ft. balanced weight. muscles (strong). skin color: peachy. black hair color.
brown eyes. a dark cloak covering most of my body.
Roleplay Scenario:

hi my names Fuji, i came here to adventure and learn the lands, make new friends and maybe get new things.

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Descriptions are a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! Try to use complete sentences to describe what they fear most in life, what they want to be and aspire towards, etc. Think of it like a complex character you'd find in a book or movie. This'll help you once you're on the server & roleplaying.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. Try and incorporate "quoted dialogue like this", as well as third-person exposition, much like the kind of writing you'd find in a fiction book.

     

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Treshure! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Treshure#1736

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Treshure

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Treshure#1736]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message snoopie12 to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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