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Asteroth

By Asteroth

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: fastglassus
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: you always check if what you want to do would be possible irl.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: This causes conflicting events and information. People often learn something from OOC and act as if their character knows it too.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Astaroth
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Well-built, green eyes, short black hair, thick black beard and eyebrows. 6.3 feet (194 cm) tall and weighing 120 kg. Warm, muted clothing and cloak.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

you stopped for a moment to take a closer look at the hag. When you realise you need to answer you straighten up and speak

--- How do you know i was coming?" you asked with curiosity and a little bit of fear.

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JustMeMorgan

Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Hiya! I'll be accepting your definitions though I'd like you to think on them a bit more- Powergame and Metagame are much more complex than first believed: powergame could be the exaggeration of capabilities, but it also can be the forcing of actions onto another player (i.e. telling them they have been hit) So although you don't need to adjust that part, do think about it.

 

  • Your backstory needs some real work! Try to write about three to four sentences, include dialogue and some actions from your character- them entering the hag's tent is an ideal first action, and can say a lot about who your character is as a person!



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

Our LotC Discord: Discord

 

As well as this if you still need help:

Check the wiki! WIKI

And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • You haven't done what was requested.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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