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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its when you know something that your ingame character shouldnt know about yet
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its when you interact with the game
    Status: Denied

a human boy that loved to have stuff and was a master at stealing it he learner by himself and got caught stealing the mayor jewels and was banished from his village


Character Name: mitchel stark
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a boy who was kicked out of his village for stealing the villagers stuff
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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You still haven't made the following changes. Unfortunately, I have to deny you again since you're on a guest account and cannot make edits. I advise you to make an account so that if you make mistakes on your next app I will set it to pending instead of denying it, and you would be able to simply edit it.

- Your definition of powergaming is incorrect, please ensure that it is corrected in your next application. You may look up the definitions in google or from our wiki, but be warned that plagiarism (Copy-pasting) isn’t allowed. You must write it in your own words, or it will result in an immediate denial. Lord of the Craft's wiki link for the definitions & lore: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

- Your definition of metagaming is correct, but I advise you to adjust your wording for clarification. Adding an example would help!

- Your character's biography isn't enough. Try adding more details to the character's backstory and don't forget to mention some of his relevant history! Where he was born, his childhood, his life growing up, his aspirations, etc.

- You must reference at least one piece of the lore in your biography; such as the name of a city, a guild, a notable figure, attractions & landmarks, a past occurance / event, etc.

You may find such in our wiki. Link: https://www.wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

- The character's description should describe how he looks like. His general facial structure, eye color, hair color, hair type, skin color, any significant birth marks or scars, etc.

- Being "bad at straight-up pvp" isn't an interesting RP fact, a valid substitution would be "Weak when it comes to melee combat" or swordsmanship, or archery, etc. Keep in mind that the weakness doesn't have to be combat related.

- I've seen that skin being used in several instances ingame, so it would cause a lot of confusion and it makes it much less unique to your character. I advise you to change it. For skin references, you may check out this link: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the ingame chat!

If you need any help, I suggest you join our new players' discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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