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By MissJBell

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using things from out-of-character to benefit in game play.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing things that are extreme and beyond characters abilities to control gameplay to the players advantage.
    Status: Denied

Elowen is a young Dark Elf, at only 55 years of age.  She was born to mother Elynea and father Devas.  Devas is hard on Elowen.  They are allies of the Clan Yl'Asath and Morvayn and currently reside within the territories of the Holy Orenian Empire   Elowen has developed a fascination with human life and how fleeting it is.  Elowen's fascination started with her accidental befriending of a human boy.  They spent much of his childhood playing games and getting into mischief.  They bonded over shared difficulties with their fathers. Unfortunately for Elowen, humans are fragile and her friend fell to the cruelty of his father's hands.  Now she chooses to observe humans from a distance and does not interfere with their dealings.  Elowen is a skilled singer and enjoys listening to songs from the ancestors.

Character Name: Elowen Wren
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 55
Physical Description: Elowen is average height at 5'5".She has light grey skin with lavender undertones, hair is misty white She has one strange green eye and one lavender.
Roleplay Scenario:

"Hello, I'm just passing through, sir."  "I wish to travel with little interference.  Please step aside."

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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

→ Your Character Biography states that your character’s father is allied with the clans Yl'Asath and Morvayn. Without explicit permission from the leaders of the clans, you shouldn’t create relations with existing clans/families. Please remove this, or get permission from the leaders and show it to me. 

 

→ Your Physical Description states that she has two different coloured eyes. While heterochromia is possible, it isn’t to the extreme your character has it. Maybe change the other eye to a different shade of the same colour. For example purple and violet eyes.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as her skin colour is far too purple for a Dark Elf. Dark Elves can have a slight tinge of purple or blue, it cannot be the dominate colour. Please fix this accordingly!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

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Melpomenne

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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥ 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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