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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Budak#9339
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Gathering information out of your characters mind , using discord , or source outside of the rp.
    Example - I am currently in City A and I've got information that there is a fight happening in City B , but I didnt get that info IC , I took it ooc and metagamed to know.
    When you use a IRL knowledge in IC RP scenario.
    My character wants to interact with someone , but I read the name of the person IRL and out of character in rp , and thats called metagaming
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is making unrealistic or unfair actions in IC Roleplay scenario on the RP servers
    Basicly when someone does something unfair , which probably couldnt not happen IRL , like *Killed 25 people in the tavern with a dagger*
    or another example *Bob57 cut off Kitty29's hand*

    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.
You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
How do you respond? Yonash  looked to the man , his bald head  moved to the side. "I look for a new life to begin in here. If you can give it to me in this such place , please, let me pass." he said . Making his way from the docks,  the bazaar caught his attention, he looked at it  with widely opened eyes, never having seen such a concentration of people. He  give it a wide breathe, trying to look normal in the eyes  of those who passed by. Yonash said to himself "Let's try", then, *he entered the nearest Inn to get some food and rent a room*
(I hope I will get accepted  this time , I tried my best doing this application , if you are reading this , have a great day.


Character Name: Bertram Vilmon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Muscular , yellow eyes , no hair neither any facial , , scar on the left eye , 186 cm height.
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks has several issues:
    • You must include only personality traits. Knowing how to use a lockpick is not a personality trait. When rewriting, please also include a significant negative personality trait.
  • Your Character Name does not match the name in your Backstory. Please change it to one or the other. 
  • Your Backstory has various problems:
    • Your character has already 'killed many people' and 'kills for a living'. For new player applications, this would be considered very heavy powergaming, because you haven't been able to RP out having the skills to do that.
    • You need 2 lore references. For assistance here, visit our Wiki. 
    • Your biography has numerous grammatical errors. While it is not a requirement for every sentence to be absolutely perfect, the application must be readable. Yours was riding the fine line, but fell off towards the unreadable side.


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @Nilyeet#0515.

If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F). For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ )

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