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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using knowledge your in game person would not otherwise know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing someone to do something such as severing their arm or killing them
    Status: Denied

Mac used to be the captain of a cargo ship, and would haul cargo across the oceans for many months at a time. Until one day he found out that his First Mate was a pirate and he scuttled the ship, raiding it and leaving everyone to die. Mac miraculously escaped the incident and went home to his wife and found out she had remarried. It was then that he started wandering until he had found a place to call home. During that time he would be involved in many bar fights and brawls. He later enlisted in a town militia at 36 and would rise to the rank of Capitan. Mac remarried at 37  and was enjoying life until his town was burnt to the ground by a rivaling faction. Being widowed twice over Mac would find his way to many pubs until finally find somewhere to call home...

Character Name: Mac Donahue
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 47
Physical Description: Brown Hair, receding hairline,roughly 6.1, 136lbs, small scars all over his face, beginning of a beard, and old ring on his left hand, decent build
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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As you are using a guest account, you will need to make another application to try again. Please make the requested edits then re-apply

 

Ø  Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however I'd like you to add a bit more detail to them, and add some examples.

Ø  You need to include at least one lore reference in your character biography- refer to the Wiki to find these.

Ø  Your character cannot be related to any form of royalty/nobility. Please change this

Ø  You need to include one weakness as part of your three interesting facts- please add one.

Ø  The eyes on your skin are a little too bright to look realistic, I'd ask that you make the blue a bit darker.

 

I strongly recommend you make a forum account, as this will allow you to edit applications as well as use our forums for roleplay purposes.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

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