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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using out of game information to progress in game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Leeching onto op players so you don't have to follow story and progress
    Status: Denied

A humble cave dwarf who lived with his small family. During the entirety of their lives they had always stayed at home as I went out to mine, one day however tragedy strikes as they attack... It was his brother who had despised him since the day they were born their parents had loved me more because I was smarter and stronger than him he hated me for it and because he knew he would never defeat me he caught my whole family off guard. I attempted to save them but it was all too late they were gone.

 

I saw my Childs'  thoughts and there was not a single sign of my wife so I know he had taken her I carry my daughters favourite toy and my sons poleaxe and vowed to save their mother and end my brother I am not the symbol of good or bad I am the symbol of vengeance I am 

Character Name: Killian
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 110
Physical Description: scar under right eye cuts on cheeks and arms slightly bulky
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Unfortunately, your application has been...

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-Your powergaming definition is almost there, but not quite correct. If you can, the next time that you apply, allow the AT member an example so that they're fully understanding that you know what it is. If need be, you may look on the LotC Wiki but remember to not plagiarize. 

-Where does Killian live? What's the Dwarven City? If you can put these responses into your next application that would be grandiose. 

-Please note that if you wouldn't have been a guest account then you would have been put on pending, but guests cannot edit their applications. I really recommend creating a forum account if you can. If not, then that's fine too and you can just reapply as a guest once more.

 

You may re-apply once you have made the changes required. I suggest joining the New Player Help Discord where you will be greeted by Application Moderators, General Helpers, and many members of our Community - they can answer any questions that you might have regarding the server. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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