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MrFlamable


MrFlamable
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Lester Peper#0841
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you know something before receiving any formal and adequate information at the time you were supposed to know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you're roleplaying, but you start to present the actions that the other person will do without them saying they did it. Hard to explain in my own words, but this is not allowed in this server.
    Status: Denied

My character was born on the Greek island of Lefkada where he got the Greek name Orpheus. In this place a small community of dark elves lived here and praised an old ancestor which used magical powers that are lost today to protect their tribe. They don't know the name of this person, so they pronounced them as the Dark Lord. At the age of 15, Orpheus noticed that something red and glowing was spreading from their arm, which ended up being a very rare infection that eliminates emotions from the body slowly in time. When Orpheus' parents gathered enough money over time, they left on Orpheus' 18th birthday to seek help in the land of Almaris as they had a better chance of dealing with the issue, but they were disappointed with the news they received saying that the magic that they're looking for has been lost for decades and hasn't been found yet. Later on when Orpheus was 21, his parents were killed by human guards sent by a rich family of high elves to kill two dark elves for procedures unknown which created the bias that Orpheus has had against high elves and how they can do whatever they please. One thing that seemed to trouble Orpheus was how the feeling of sadness towards the loss of his parents was not as intense as it would've been. Fast forward at the age of 24, Orpheus became a successful contractor that granted favors for money, but still searches for the mystical power that will save the emotions that have withered away. All Orpheus has is the fear of losing all emotion and the awe towards the Dark Lord.


Character Name: Orpheus Alanis
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Yellow eyes, purple cloak, pitch black skin.
Roleplay Scenario:

Orpheus would begin to stare into the mans eyes and would look down again, responding "I have business here... none of which should concern you". He'd then walk around the gentlemen with no feeling of empathy towards completely passing that man, but that's the response of a person that's losing the capability to feel emotion. 

For most encounters like this, Orpheus would not think much of it but a small obstacle that waists time.

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Hi! As you can see, your application has been put on pending, so you're almost ready! There are just a few changes you need to make, but don't worry- you're doing great! 

  • Your Character Biography states that you character was born in Greece. Greece does not exist on the server, so you should remove this from your character's biography!

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race. Dark elves can't have yellow eyes (your skin should not show yellow eyes either once you update this)!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Character Fear Response states that your character has a condition/virus that takes away their emotions. Nothing like this exists on the server as far as I know, so this should be removed as well! If I'm mistaken on that though, please link me any lore posts that explain otherwise! 

You will be given 24 hours to correct the needed changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! 

 


Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

If you still need help, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki and or our Application Guide

 WIKI

Application Guide

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason that too many errors were made.

  • Your Character Biography states that you character was born in Greece. Greece does not exist on the server, so you should remove this from your character's biography!

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race. Dark elves can't have yellow eyes (your skin should not show yellow eyes either once you update this)!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Character Fear Response states that your character has a condition/virus that takes away their emotions. Nothing like this exists on the server as far as I know, so this should be removed as well! If I'm mistaken on that though, please link me any lore posts that explain otherwise! 

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Pan#9864, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

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