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Lord De Montifort

By Lord De Montifort

    • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: alter phrasing to suggest an attempt at an attack and by allowing the opposing player to emote in response to such an attempt.

    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: you may not use information in roleplay until your character learns about it themselves in a natural way
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Lord De Montifort
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 70
Physical Description: 5,8 180 pounds wears a powdered wig and makeup from the 1600s white hair and a 1600s suit
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

*I take a seat in front of the mystery person and begin my story* "I was riding in my carriage, when the horse got spooked and the carriage slammed into a rock. The horse was no where to be seen. I dusted myself off, and started to follow the dimly lit road, I picked up the pace and then stumbled across this swampy town in the middle of nowhere. I am looking to stay here for the night. So in the morning, I can venture off and find a purpose here. And find piles upon piles of riches and gold." 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are nobility, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.  
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks. Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person! Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are nobility, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.  
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks. Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person! Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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