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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Cisco69#7810
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming means in-game characters using information that they wouldn't have any way of knowing, ie: using information acquired from real-life scenarios in-game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming means doing unrealistic actions, like killing a big number of opponents single-handedly or forcing emotes on others.
    Status: Denied

Hagen was born to Wilbur and Hazel Hallewell, in a small nameless village far from any prominent civilization. His early years were fairly happy and simple, but it was about to change soon. His mother died giving birth to his little brother, Oli. Even though Hagen was too young to comprehend what has happened, he still cried a lot that day. His father was also devastated but he kept himself calm because he knew has 2 boys to look after. They moved to Haense in search for a better job and a better pay. Hagen and Oli had to look after themselves when their father went to work, Hagen despised Oli at first and blamed him for his mother's death but deep down he knew that Oli was just a baby and that he couldn't do such a thing. They both became close soon, after all both of them were just kids. They were soon inseparable and were each other's best friends. Everything was going fine for Little Hagen but fate had darker plans for him. Oli soon caught the plague. Wilbur with his farmer's wage couldn't afford treatment for Oli, they turned to god, and visited the Church Of Canon every day, and prayed for Oli's recovery. All the prayers did nothing to help little Oli, he soon died a painful death while Wilbur and Hagen could only watch and try to console him. This was again a very dark time for both Wilbur and Hagen. after Oli's death, Hagen lost all his belief in karma, religion, god, etc. Wilbur blamed himself for Oli's death as he couldn't afford to pay for his treatments and got depressed, he started drinking. One day Wilbur went to drink but he never returned. 16-year-old Hagen waited for him for 2 days, and then he accepted what might have happened and then went looking for work to feed himself, he soon joined the military. Joining the military helped him take his mind off his brother and his father. Hagen was a good listener and talked to the veterans of previous wars quite often to hear their stories, what he learned while talking to them surprised him, wars against other humans were not fought for the safety of the people, it was fought so that whatever king was ruling could stay as the king. This didn't make him resent the monarchy, he admired it more, how a specific family can rule millions of people for generations and stay in power. Hagen wanted power, he soon left the army to fight for himself, to be rich, to be in power.

Character Name: Hagen Hallewell
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brown hair, black eyes, pale white skin, well built but not buff. 170 pounds 6 feet
Roleplay Scenario:

Hagen trips on a crooked plank as he steps on the port, he steadies himself by grabbing a stranger's arm in the port. The stranger looked at Hagen surprised, He replied with a smile and both of them walked away without speaking a  word to each other. Hagen proceeds to walk towards the city, he is astonished by the size of the walls surrounding the city. He looks around the port earnestly and finds a sprawling bazaar nearby. As he steps foot towards the bazaar, he is approached by a well-dressed gentleman, he looks upon Hagen with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”  Hagen was taken aback, rich people normally don't usually start conversations with commoners like him, he looked at the well-dressed man, then at the sprawling bazaar and replied effortlessly, "I don't know, let's find out." and started walking towards the market

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • To answer your question regarding the rules -- 

    • Your character’s name will be what shows up in the text. This is when you are in #rp, #w, and #s, but it’ll be your username when you are in #looc, #ooc, and #h. When doing role-play, you are only able to hear others through text if you are close enough to them (to keep everything more realistic. This can all be explained in greater detail when on the server but here is a little overview of how it works. 

 

  • Your character’s skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one! 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord at __Soph#3808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

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  • Your roleplay scenario cannot include any inner thoughts. Purely physical! 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

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