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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when the player determines what the character does not what the player would do
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is the story of the game
    Status: Denied

Elden left his home at an earlier time to explore the world he lived, hearing the magical tales from travelers about the ruins through the land. Elden wishes for nothing more but the adventures at his finger tips. As a person at first he can be cold and unforgiving, but is just only afraid to open up towards people if they may not last long. He loves a good fight and can keep up with most and almost never takes fights seriously. He is a marksman and favors the traditional bow and arrow. He relies on speed and intelligence to over come his foes. While he may not seem it he is always imagining the worst possible outcome. he hides this fact with witty remarks and a cocky attitude.


Character Name: Elden of the Ero Clan
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: My Character is a rebellious and defiant person he trust himself more than others and prefers to hang around those he can trust. Eye-green,Hair- black
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now. Consider contacting on me on discord if you need further explanation. 

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Keep in mind that elves culturally don't become adults before they turn 50 years old. So it wouldn't be realistic for your character to already leave his home when he's just 18 years old. 

 

✦ Snow elves tend to be a bit paler in their skin tone, same could be said about their clothing etc. You may want to take a closer look at our skin archive for future reference. 

 

 

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

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