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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming:''Metagaming is when you use knowledge that you didn't get from in game in game."
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming:"Powergaming is when you rp in unfairly, and make yourself stronger than you actually are."
    Status: Denied

From the great family name of McChopin I Henry Mchopin  am embarking the great land of Atlis seeking riches and brother hood. I will install fear in my enemy's soul with my battle cry and fight with all my heart for my banner lords. With being a skilled farmer I will be a worthy asset to my fellow brothers. 


Character Name: Henry McChopin
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Hard worker and one who know's something about a blade or battleaxe and not afraid to use it!!!
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft!

Unfortunately, your application has been…

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I'm afraid I have to deny your app since this is a guest account and therefore you cannot make edits to the application. If you were registered, I would've been able to set it to pending while you made the sufficient changes. But don't worry! You may re-apply again after making the following changes:

- You must include one weakness among the three interesting facts about your character. Gluttony is also a loose negative trait, as it could be both a weakness and a strength depending on the situation.

- You must reference at least one piece of the lore in your biography, simply mentioning Atlas won't do. It could be naming a city, a guild, a notable figure, attractions & landmarks, a past occurance / event, etc. You may find such in our wiki. Link: https://www.wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

- This change is optional, but for the sake of you having a good time on the server you should consider writing a more detailed biography that you could go back to when your character is questioned about his past or such! Your current one does not contain sufficient information on your character. You need to write a backstory for your character. It should include their birth, childhood, how they grew up and what they liked doing, what made them progress to what they are now and some notable events in their life, and their aspirations, etc. It seems a bit vague and doesn't tell us much about the character with it containing only where he lived and solely his aspirations and dreams. I advise you to tell us more!

 

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the ingame chat!

If you need any help, I suggest you join our new players' discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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