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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You avoid powergaming by respecting other players’ choices, letting your character have limits, and focusing on shared storytelling instead of always trying to win.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it uses out-of-character knowledge to make in-character decisions, giving unfair advantages, breaking immersion, and ruining the shared story for everyone.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Kaelor Veyth
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Kaelor is 6’2” with a lean, sturdy build, dark hair marked by a pale streak, and amber eyes. (I can't add more for some reason)
Roleplay Scenario:

“…My story?” you repeat softly, easing onto the cushion. At 6’2”, your frame feels almost too large for the cramped tent. Your hand brushes the frayed edge of the red scarf around your neck, the last gift from your family. Amber eyes flicker toward the hag, then back to the drifting candles.

“I was born in a quiet village—just a man, nothing more. But I was marked by suspicion, treated as if I carried misfortune everywhere I went. No matter what I did, no kindness could change their minds. So I left, carrying only this scarf and the memory of what home used to mean.”

The hag tilts her head, studying you with sharp, glinting eyes. A dry smile curves her lips.

“Ah, a man chased by shadows not of his making. You search for belonging, yet carry exile with you like a cloak. The world does not cast you out without reason… perhaps your steps here were no accident.”

The candles waver as if stirred by unseen breath, and the air grows heavier—waiting on what you’ll say next.


"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Parts of your application are written with AI. Please rewrite this without the use of such tools.
  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person. Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! (High elves don't have dark hair!). Please refer to the Racial Hub WIKI page for more information.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive! → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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