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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Respect people's agency and don't be rude. Just be nice to people.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It takes people out of immersion and gives them unfair advantage.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Numin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A lean 5'6" (168 cm) and weighs about 150 lbs (68 kg), with monk robes, dark hair and black eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

Numin lowers himself onto the cushion as if setting down a pilgrim’s pack; his robe whispers against the wet canvas. He folds his hands around a small, worn satchel and lets the candlelight paint the hollows of his face. When he speaks his voice is low, careful—more like a prayer than a proclamation.

“I am called Numin,” he says, “though names matter less on the road than the burdens you carry.” He fingers the leather strap of his satchel and pulls free a sprig of crushed bluewort, the scent faint and bitter in the candle air. “I was raised where the air is thin and the chant never ends—an anchoress’ cloister on a cold ridge. We tended the sick, mixed poultices, and read the old herbals until the letters blurred. I learned to listen to roots as much as to prayers.”

He tilts his head, watching the candle flames ripple. “One night in meditation I saw a white flame cross a dark sea and touch a land of fog and reeds. I woke with my hands shaking and the taste of salt on my tongue. The abbess said it was a calling; others called it a fancy. I took neither name. I took my satchel, a few remedies, and a vow: I would follow that flame and learn what it sought.”

His eyes find the hag’s, steady as a healer’s. “I travel to gather cures and to ease what I can. A plague here, a broken child there—wherever sorrow gathers, I go. And yet, what I seek is not only to bind wounds. There is a sickness I cannot name that bruises the world—hunger for a thing lost to time. I was told the mist-lands hold a root that remembers sunlight, a remedy for that hollow. It led me here.”

*Backstory*
Born among high terraces that climb the mountain slopes, Numin apprenticed in a mist-wreathed monastery where wind-bent pines and alpine herbs taught him their slow medicines. Under an old mountain apothecary—part-hermit, part-teacher—he learned to bind poultices with prayer and to read the language of roots and rocks. A pale lantern-vision crossed the ridges one night, and Numin took it as a vow: leave the high temples, carry his lacquered satchel of dried chrysanthemum and mugwort, and follow the call across strange lands. Now he walks as pilgrim and healer, trading cures for stories and searching for a lost root said to “remember sunlight.”

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