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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming is a ban able thing.it is like using information outside of are own charater using this as a guild, this happen by messaging other players by skype team speak or other sort of thing this can also happen in the server using message command to
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: is emote action that does not allow other players to defend or protect simply it does not give a chance for the other player like-PLAYER ONE CUTS PLAYER 2 ARM this is powergaming an this is an example for not powegaming- PLAYER 1 TRIES TO CUT PLAYER 2 HEA
    Status: Denied

one day when lite(luvenca past name) at this time he was 16 years old his home at the Serpentwoods  his father was an skilled fighter  he was a kind man but gaining a lot of skills about almost every thing when lite was 17 years old his father was killed at this time no one knew who did and why they did it but the people say they killed him because of some thing his father has found in his adventures  the sword owned by his father was gone lite was disparate for revenge at this time they was no doubt about it 

but they could not make lite stop going to find revenge until he brings the sword lite fathers sword then lite give the honor to lite father that he found out that his father was killed behalf of the sword in this lite could not make a war or fight he had no men and no one knew who did it.LITE was a brave and talented his ]was talented like his father the people said.He wanted revenge and seeking it as the wise man in the forest/woods said"you need the the revenge for your fathers honor and to make your father soul reset find the sword taken from it and take their life for the sword young child find what you own " lite was ready to leave the forest and all the people wish him luck and hope for their only hope to prove he was ready for the journey he should prove himself for it fight the  man in village who wants to fight with him men came in to fight with lite lite had a fair fight but the fight was not going to be  easy on lite hard one,at the second man the fight he memory came about his father making no sense as also his memory started flashing he did not fell well and his stamina was low of his arms and feet was running out of energy as his great weakness the memory flash he knew it was some thing about his father memory his arms was badly cut at this point but he never gave up fought till he win after that going though every thing he has given the best of the best to and at last he won proven to be choice to send to find the sword , his adventures only started finding the revenge and only having one thing in mind that the only aim is honor to his father at this time he was named as luvenca meaning the brave man


Character Name: luvenca
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: wearing dark black clothes all ways , tall , arms full of cuts, white hair cant see when he is wearing the dark black clothes ,long arms
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

Your biography is very confusing and in broken sentences with random interjections in it. It is also overly clique and normally i wouldn't have a problem with it except for this is quite bad. I ask that you rewrite this whole thing to make it clearer and less of an overused tale.

Your three interesting facts need to be full sentences, and not in caps.

Your name needs to not be in caps as well, please avoid typing in all caps at all.

Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are incomplete, they seem to have been cut off at the end. Please correct these.

 

Too edit the application, scroll down to the bottom of your application and click the 'Edit' button. From here you can change the application to fit what was mentioned above.

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

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