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By OlenaBum

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: HaleyOlena #8152
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its having outside knowledge of universe for personal gain or progress.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Somebody who learns everything they can about the game or Rp to be the best.
    Status: Denied

Noctis or Noct for short is from a small farm by a near by village she is a “Farfolk”. She comes from a big family 2 older sisters(Luna and Stella)  and 2 older brothers(Lux, Umbra.) Noct is the youngest so she consider herself the ”forgotten child”  there for she gets away with a lot of things. As a child Noct was a “lone wolf” had trouble making friends so she  often brought home stray animals to keep her company. As she got older she grew a strong relationship with her older brother Lux who also shares the same love for adventure. Noctis sneaks out often, and sometimes doesn’t come home for days on end. When she is out in the world she most likely is day dream of life of adventure, wealth, love and sometimes she even finds herself thinking of family. When she is home she is helping on the farm with chores or goes to the city to gather. Noctis is very stealthy helps her get away and out of risky and dangerous situations. Noct tends to be compulsive and doesn't always think before she acts which tends to get her in trouble. She also is tends to be to bold and out spoken. Here family is her weakness even though she shows very little affection towards them(besides Lux), they are her world. People in here village find her odd but are captivated by her beauty, but for the most part people leave her alone. When she is not in the village Noctis spends most of her days out in the world exploring be friends the animals and  seeking adventure. 

Character Name: Noctis(Noct)
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Knox is 19 has orange hair and green eyes, fair skin.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thomas

Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Unfortunately, at this time your application has been placed on pending for the following reason(s):

  • Your metagaming description, while on the right track, could use some fleshing out. 

  • Your powergaming description is unfortunately incorrect. Please refer to the link below to learn more.

  • Please include 2 pieces of server lore into your backstory.

  • Please include one objectively negative trait about your character in interesting facts.

Please make the above corrections, and contact me on Discord at Tahmas#0117 once having made these fixes so I may re-review your application.

 

You only have 24 Hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes, you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord.

 

Additionally, you are welcome to join our  New Player Discord if you haven’t done so already as to meet with the existing community and staff members.

 

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Thomas

 

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Unfortunately, at this time this application has been denied for the following reasons:

  • You failed to alert me within 24 hours of the required changes.

You may reapply immediately, however please ensure that any previously suggested corrections have been made.

You may contact me with any concerns of questions through Discord at Tahmas#0117.

 

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