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Minth_11

By Minth_11

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Onyx#6303
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: defying the border between real-life and and their role-play life
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: whenever a player does not keep the limits of the character it's playing.
    Status: Denied

 

I am just a traveler looking for an inn to spent the night, and maybe some kind of job, im skilled at farming and construction.

Character Name: Onix
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: hat: pumpkin
eyes:blue
hair:unknown
medium to skinny
small muscles
weight::65 kilo or 143 lb,
always wears scarf
long jacket
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography states that you meet an undead, undeads don’t come out of the blue and are like “sup”
  • Your Character Biography states that you keep this undead in your garage, there are no garages on the server
  • Your house getting burn down in a Common charter trope Please take a look at this link
  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/
  • Your Character Biography states that the undead taught you magice, You need to find someone on the server to teach you. (you can mention that you’ve seen magic however knowing how to use it is a other story)
  • Your Character Biography states that he was out during the fire so there no way he could have been burnt by it
  • Your Character Biography states that he wares a pumpkin mask on his head that’s make of an actual pumpkin that won’t work on the server
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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