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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: information needed about a character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: making a character too overpowered
    Status: Denied

i was born on September 15th. I’m the oldest child in my whole family. i have 2 younger siblings, one sister and one brother. My sister is the youngest and my brother is the middle child. Me and my sister are 2 years apart in age. We were a very happy family before my dad went out searching for something and never returned. i was never told what he was looking for. After my dad disappeared, my mom tried really hard to support my family. Since i was the oldest i was expected to help the family as well so i tried to look for some work.

Character Name: Sakura
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: purple and blue hair with a fox tail
Roleplay Scenario:

I smile back and say “ I’ve come here to get a bit of money but I also want to have a nice adventure!”

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to an unrealistic character, missing lore in your background, an inappropriate skin, and a plethora of other reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made should you re-apply: 

 

  • Your skin cannot include modern clothing, tails, and multi-colored hair. 
  • Elves cannot have tails, nor should they have rainbow hair. For a reference on Elves, check https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves. 
  • Your background requires at least 10 sentences, with 2 references of lore. Please refer to https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net for lore.
  • Your roleplay scenario lacks an action & 4 sentences.
  • Dates in the real world (September 15th) don’t exist in LOTC.
  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are incorrect. Please check https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming.
  • Your personality/quirks must include at least one con/disadvantage (i.e. ‘Addicted to gambling).
  • Please improve upon your grammar & spelling. If you use Chrome, you can use Grammarly for this.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @TreeSmoothie#2018, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: 

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