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    • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming breaks character by acknowledging facts that your character shouldn't know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you don't really care about the story, you would rather just power though to reach the goal.
    Status: Denied

 

Axeton was born in the Kingdom of Kaz'Ulrah into the clan of Stonemace. As a young beardling, Axton explored the mountains with friends, but as he grew he realized not everything is sunshine and roses. When Axeton was 23 his father died when he drunkenly walked off a cliff. Ever since then Axeton hasn't been fond of alcohol. during the depressing time following his father's death, Axeton began to explore his thoughts instead of the mountains, when he did this, Axeton had discovered that he had a love of stories and myths of the Caras Eldar and Orcish ruins. He loved them so much, he wanted to have stories of his own. Axeton set off looking for adventure. And that is where our story begins.

 

Character Name: Axeton
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 173
Physical Description: long black hair, beard goes below his chest, large pores, eyes are sunken and thoughtful, red cheeks, and laugh lines from the joy of life.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Dromui

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As of now, your application is under review and has been put onto Pending. I'll need you to make a few changes the application and you'll be good to go, boss.

  • Your definition of powergaming only covers one aspect of the term itself. Go ahead and take a closer look at the rules for me, update the definition of powergaming, and you'll be good to go.
  • The backstory was a good read, it's an interesting take on why your character isn't fond of alcohol and the like. Though Caras Eldar is currently the capitol of the Dominion of Malin. As such, it isn't quite in ruins: yet. Go ahead and edit that up a bit, and you're solid.
  • You have quite a few interesting facts there that make your character unique, but I'm not seeing a flaw. I need at least one and you're set. Make that edit, and I'll be ready and willing to accept you, good sir.

If you need help please feel free to message me on the forums, comment on here, message me on discord, or go ahead and @ me on the status updates or my profile directly. You have 24 hours to make the changes necessary for your app to be accepted. Good luck, my friend.

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Dromui

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After creating an account on the forums, your application was accepted elsewhere. This is just for filing purposes, you will remain accepted on the server.

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