phatskeng

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ Your Power Gaming definition is incorrect.

→ Your Biography must include at least one lore reference.

→ Your Biography must be at least six sentences long.

→Your Skin should match your Physical description [For this one, I’d say you should add some more detail to the character’s physical description. Simply commenting on height isn't enough.]

→Your Persona’s Fear must be at least two sentences long

→Your persona’s Drive must be at least two sentences long

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant disadvantage

→ Your Role Play scenario must be four sentences long

→ Your Role Play scenario needs to be in the third person.

→ Your Role Play scenario must include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

→ Your Role Play scenario must include at least one action. 

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord mady#9397. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX