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Wynfir

By Wynfir

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    Discord: Pieman101#8401
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I've played DnD for years as a DM and player. i know what boundaries to not cross. and just think before you act. instead of saying "my character did this or that" say it in a way that others can participate like this "as I run towered he canyon I jump over trying to make it to the other side" because now someone else could chime in witth "NO WAIT! I yell seeing Wenrys jump in a canyon and hitting the wall" or "As i see Wenrys jump i close my eyes. when i open i see he made it!" that way its fun for everyone and our not overpowered
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it can create a power gap and isn't really role play. you don't meta game real-life and you shouldn't here as well. this server isn't made for that and you would just be ruining it for everyone
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Wynfir
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: 6,2, 190 lbs, blue eyes, black hair, bit lighter than dark green tunic with a dark yellow border around it. with black shoes and a black undershirt
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

* I set down my cart filled with herbs leaves and other carefully assorted plants.  as i walk around confused for a minute or two i look touch an inspect this oddly decorated room. as i sit down i begin talking. * You know, my grandpa told me to look out for strange folk but... I never could have imagined this. i come from a small village no more than 30 people and me and my grandpa were farmers. yes we planted carrots, melons, potato's etc. but... we also grew our own tea leaves. you see I'm the apprentice of the grate... Winrys! although, you probably don't know him. he was the greatest tea maker in all the lands. he could brew anything you wanted. you injured , poised, tired, or just want a drink he has one for everting. * I realize I'm rambling and getting overly exited as i sit back down in my seat * sorry about that Lets back up. See as a kid I never had parents they went to fight in the war and never game back *tears filling my eyes as i try to fight them back* that when i found him, or rather he found me. Winrys, he found me all alone and took me in as his own he raised me fed me and taught me everything I know. as i was saying, about a month ago i thought i was ready and he sent me on my way. he gave me this cart filled with supplies and some of his recopies. He told me it will be hard but i don't care ill show him! so I went on my way. all i want to do is make him proud. to be honest i don't know where i am, i just picked a direction and walked. that's how i ended up here, about that... where am I?

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KaptainScarlet

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please review the term Metagaming and include your definition and understanding of it, your current answer is a bit vague.

 

- Your roleplay response should be written in 3rd POV.

Example: John grimaced when looking at the dirty pillow cushion, still he took a seat. "Hello ma'am..."

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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_mady07

Changed Status to Denied


 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ You have not responded within 48 hours!

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord mady2007. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

 

 

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