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plaguecorpse
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: plaguecorpse#9406
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using outside knowledge to gain the advantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: only selecting the most power options, only caring for powerfull characters and not the story
    Status: Denied

Dakkon was born to a highborn dwarven couple in a city not far from Urguan and given all the luxuries in life. growing up he was at the top of his classes, excelling in strategy games and contests of strength. He was a fast learner, and always loved a challenge. he continued to excel in all things and when he became of age he joined the military.he overcame all obstacles and challenges and quickly rose through the ranks. His primary job was to look after the patrols and the overall overseeing of the deeproads and all the deep mine shafts. it wasn’t long before he was wed to another of a highborn house, Glouinda, and had a family of four. 

 

One day, after years of bliss, Something happened deep in the mines. Something awoke from the darkness, a demon of earth and fire arose and began slaughtering the workers and sentries posted, the alarm went off. Every dwarf was either running for their families or running to defend their city, Dakkon sought to protect them all so he gathered his forces and made a stand. The fighting was tremendous and many were slaughtered untill it was just Dakkon and the demon from the deep. Dakkon wounded the demon with a blow from his axe and was swatted like a bug, his body slamming against the stone wall and he blacked out.

 

When he awoke the air was silent, bodies strewn around him like dust upon the earth. A sudden realization occured to him and he rushed back to his home. He slammed the door open to find a horrific sight upon him. Seven 6 ashen forms in the corner and burnt armor in the middle of the room covered in soot. Dakkon slumped to his knees and cried, everything he knew and loved was gone. Anger quickly filled his heart  and he vowed to become strong enough to rid the world of all the darkness and abandoned his now forgotten city. He has never forgotten the ruin that Iblees curse had brought upon his people, and once his vow is fufilled, it will never come to harm his people again. He awaits the time when he has proven his worthiness so he can see his family in Khaz’A’Dentrumm, to die now would mean he would fall in disgrace, letting his home fall, and never seeing his loved ones again.

 

He now travels the world in hopes of vanquishing evil, bbecoming stronger so that one day he may face his demons.


Character Name: dakkon bloodfist
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: short strong, orange bear with green eyes no hair
Roleplay Scenario:

Manling, you best leave me be, i bare you no harm but I keep my business to myself, If i have need of you, I will let you know.

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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions need improvement. Please refer to our Wiki for assistance in the future. 
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please fix it or find a new skin via our Skin Archive
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks has no negative trait. This is a requirement.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario does not meet the requirements either, which is one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes, one action, and a minimum of four lines total. 

  • Your Character Biography has many issues, among them being:
    - The fact that we do not allow the common character trope of ‘all my friends/my village/ my parents died in an attack but I was the sole survivor!’ 
    - The way that this is written makes it seem like your character is already well known. Any form of notoriety is now allowed to be written into backstories and is encouraged to be earned through roleplay.
    - The fact that you mention a demon that massacres an entire group of people. As far as I am aware, this has never happened in our lore. If you’ve found it somewhere, I am curious as to where! Send me a link to the place you found it via forum message or Discord DM if you believe this to be a mistake.


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

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