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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: maintain a calm demeanor and contact the appropriate overhead to correct the issue
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It disrupts the flow of the story and creates confusion.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ben Ador
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A completely average looking individual. A height of 5' 11'', weight of 180lbs, brown hair, and brown eyes. He prefers to wear natural color clothing.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example:

**Ben takes the offered seat and warmly shakes the hag's hand. He then gestures to his neck with an emphasized look on his face and wide eyes.

 

If the hag were to be confused,

**After hearing the Hag's confusion, Ben frantically mimics writing on a piece of paper.

 

Just as a note, Ben is mute in this case.

 

 

As a backstory, Ben is a farm boy who grew up on his father's wheat farm. He grew strong over the years, helping his father bring in the straw for storage in the barn and hauling grain with the mules. Unfortunately, like many other farm children, his family lost the farm due to instability in the region and poor harvests. After the sale and move, the family barely had enough to rent a lot in Vallagne. Now, with his family struggling to adjust to the new living circumstances, he does odd jobs across town to help make ends meet. Will he remain in Vallagne forever? Will his family fully recover? Will his speech impediment be his downfall? We don't know yet!

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Your response is not quite right, but it is very close and a good response none the less! Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.
     
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @plausiblewings2 to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub!: New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

Hi! It’s been over 48 hours and the changes requested haven’t been made! So this application will be denied, however. If you wish to reapply, this application just needs the following edits.

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Your response is not quite right, but it is very close and a good response none the less! Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
     
  • Try some more actions! Writing is all about finding a balance between dialogue and actions. I’d love to see how this character motions or maybe even interacts with the stranger!

My discord is @plausiblewings2 if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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