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PolerIce

PolerIce

By PolerIce

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: PolerIce#7130
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: idk
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

My parents were poler bears but i turd human

Character Name: PolerIce
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: strong tall
Roleplay Scenario:

none of the above i came for business

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Carson

Changed Status to Under Review

Unfortunately, I've had to **deny** your application for the following reasons. Don't worry! After you get an idea of what needs to be fixed, you can reapply for the server again at **any time**!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as it is a polar bear. Please fix this accordingly!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
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  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
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  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
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  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 


Here's a link to your application again for easier access: 

And I would also highly suggest joining the LOTC official discord for easier access to help, for events, announcements, etc:
https://discord.com/invite/fwEQA2F

Also, if you want to find more information on the server lore, just check out the wiki on the link below!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Finally, feel free to familiarize yourself with the New Player Hub for when you are accepted! It includes commands, and other useful things for when you are accepted!
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub

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