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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: spanks#1214
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Acknowledging the world outside of the roleplay, or the fact that you are playing a game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Roleplaying to be so overpowered other people don't have a chance to affect you in the story. Usually by people who need complete control for their power fantasy.
    Status: Denied

"why are you asking me all these questions?" 

I would keep walking, moving past him. 

"i dont trust rich people asking questions, usually means they want something from you."

 

Character Name: scimmia
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: medium height, somewhat muscular/athletic build, olive skin dark hair with green eyes. 155-160 lbs. Wears the hide of a large ape as armor.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=">

 

→ Ensure that you provide examples of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ Regarding your physical description, “Wears the hide of a large ape as armor.” This can be something you get after you join the server, however you won’t be able to start with this item. 

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. While I understand that in your physical description you put that you wear an ape skin, this wouldn’t be allowed off the bat, nor does your skin match “Wearing a skin”.

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord cobbler#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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