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Rukthar
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by using tenative language like i attempt or i try to
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: not playing within the character's perspective and solely making decisions based on in-character knowledge.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Rukthar
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: This goblin has a solid, heavy build for his kind, with a thick torso and sturdy limbs, His skin is a muted green,
Roleplay Scenario:

I was born beneath old roots in a goblin den carved from black earth. I was bigger than the others from the start—stronger, harder to kill. The elders said I carried war-chief blood. I only knew that strength kept you breathing.

My den taught me how easily goblins die. So I hunted alone, fought harder than needed, and earned scars early. They named me Rukthar after my first blood hunt, when I dragged back prey too large for one goblin.

The raiders came at dawn.

Humans in steel burned our tunnels and butchered my tribe. I fought them in the smoke and fire, killing two before a man with a red-crested helm drove his spear up beneath my brow. I remember the sound more than the pain. My right eye went dark forever. I tore his throat out anyway.

When it ended, my den was ash and blood. I crawled out half-blind and watched the raiders ride away, laughing, their banners burned into my memory. I will never forget them.

The wound festered, but I lived. I learned to fight with one eye, to judge distance by motion and instinct. What I lost in sight, I gained in focus.

I wander now. Not a chief, not a soldier—just a survivor. Other goblins fear me: too big, too quiet, too scarred. Fear turns into respect when I break stronger foes and do not fall. The road taught me what my den never did—goblins are many, but broken, killing each other while the world hunts us.

There is one thing I still fear.

Fire in tight places. The crackle of it, the way smoke eats the air and walls glow like they are alive. When flames close in and there is nowhere to run, my chest tightens and my grip shakes. I hide it well. A Goblin Lord cannot show fear. But I remember my den burning, and some nights the smell of smoke wakes me before my blade does.

I travel to grow stronger and wiser. I hunt those who burned my home, and I learn how leaders command, not just kill.

When my vengeance is done, I will not hide.

I will become Goblin Lord. I will crush weak chiefs, bind strong ones, and unite the tribes so no den burns alone again. Let the world laugh.

One day, it will kneel before a one-eyed king.

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Hello there! Your Application has been set to pending. Please make the following changes and we will happily take another look. You're almost there!:

-> Please frame your backstory like a conversation with the hag. Put "Around Dialogue", and add in a few emotes of your characters movements/reactions, etc as you converse with the hag. Otherwise application is good! Just edit that, and you'll be good to go.

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Please feel free to contact me on the forums, in-game (/msg Kingcaouette6666) or over Discord @therighthonlortime if you have any questions or would like any clarifications!

You have 48 hours to make the requested changes, or unfortunately, your application will be automatically denied. You can always reapply if this happens!

 

PLEASE NOTIFY ME WHEN YOU HAVE MADE YOUR CHANGES :)

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

- Failed to make requested edits within 48 hours.
 


 

My discord is @therighhonlortime if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

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