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By Fruity_bob

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: PsD_KWEEN#2060
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta-gaming is when a player know things like someone name without the other player telling them and when you ask oocly for icly infos like asking where a location is
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power-gaming is when a player is being too op like if you stab him he wont react and say that it didnt felt anything
    Status: Denied

Hi! My name is FruityBob! I'm fruity, very social, and always doing something

Character Name: FruityBob
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Green eyes, black hair, tall,
Roleplay Scenario:

Hi! I came here to try my luck, and make new friends! I hope i can be a good, and useful part of the community.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

→ Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action.

→ Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord garentoft#1980. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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