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Persephone
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Receiving help that enables your character to progress unnaturally well.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Acting outside of your character's reasonable abilites.
    Status: Denied

Persephone grew up alone and without knowing where she came from amongst Wood Elves. The only family she knew of was a distant cousin, a Snow Elf. Because of this, Persephone traveled Atlas often, and never stayed in her homeplace amongst the Wood Elves for too long. Because of this, she met many races and species, trained with many different people over time, and learned how to meet and charm people into giving her were every want and need. 

 

She is a highly skilled thief and grifter, but she often opts only to steal what she absolutely must. Persephone is of average height for a Wood Elf, and is attractive enough to be distracting, which aids her quick fingers. She relies on the good nature of others to support her, and has never had a true home during her youth. Because of this, she never stays in one place for too long, and moves quickly to escape the suspicion of thievery. 

 


Character Name: Persephone Umm Olufemi
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 215
Physical Description: Chocolate brown skin, brown hair and green eyes. Covered in tattoos of many kinds of flowers, in varying stages of bloom and hue.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Upon review, your application has been placed onto Pending! You're nearly there, my friend. There are just a few small changes you'll need to make to your application in order to be accepted. You have up to 24 hours to make these changes, otherwise you will be denied and will have to reapply. If you require any assistance, don't be afraid to contact a member of the Application Team, as we're here to help. Below you will find the necessary changes that must be made in order to be accepted:

  • Your metagaming definition isn't horribly incorrect, but you're missing some information that must be there.
  • Your backstory requires at least one reference to currently accepted and implemented lore. The name of the Wood Elven nation would be a good example, since you used it as a reference a few times.

I recommend joining the LotC New Player Discord as well. It's full of active members of our community who can definitely answer any questions you have or help you get involved with the roleplay. I also want to apologize for taking so long to get to this application, it was buried under several and it was negligent of us to miss it.

 

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Upon further review, your application has been Denied. If you have any questions, please feel free to message me either on the forums or over discord. You can reapply at your leisure. Have a wonderful day!

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