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Sir Nigel V

By Sir Nigel V

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Pugthug13#9595
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing the meta in the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Giving it your all in a game
    Status: Denied

He is a huminoid pug that has been taught in the ways of a knight and an archer. He had amnesia but made new memories that resulted in him killing his loved one because his emence power that he now keeps suppressed. He is comming to this land to escape what past he made.

Character Name: Sir Nigel V
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Just an average body
Roleplay Scenario:

"I came here to start a new and help people."

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to the amount of changes that need to be made. Here are those changes:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Name has the prefix of ‘Sir’ in it. This implies that your character is a knight, which they cannot start as. Knighthood must be achieved through roleplay, not backstory.
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography states that your character is a humanoid pug. This is not one of the playable races on LOTC. Please refer to our list of playable races to see which you can play!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Skin does not match LOTC lore, as I stated earlier. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Character Fears is too short! It must be at least two sentences long.
  • Your Character Dislikes is too short! It must be at least two sentences long.
  • Your Character Likes is too short! It must be at least two sentences long.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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