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    Discord: qoken
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: dont do anything thats outside of your characters limitations
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it would be unfair to the other players and leave them at a disadvantage
    Status: Denied

Character Name: rakof
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: height:6"1 slim built and very athletic
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: rakof was born in a small village and lived with his mother, father his two older brother and his little sister he was really happy with his family. But one night rakof was waling home from school after hanging out with his friends then he say that his house was broken into he quickly ran inside and saw his family on the ground slaughter with tears in his eyes he saw a shadowy figure on the door frame with eyes as red as blood and nails as long as knives ands suddenly in a flash it vanished, then ever since that night he vowed to help and protect anyone he can and also hunt down who slaughtered his family so no one would experience the same pain he did.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Hiya! For your definitions they look a bit lacklustre: try to expand on them both, treat them as a thought exercise more than a simple one liner response!

 

  • For your backstory, we're looking for you to interact almost as if you were in game and in roleplay: talking to this strange woman in a tent in a town in the middle of nowhere. Using what you've written so far, I'd suggest trying to write it out like an interaction. You can easily open with: Rakof entered the hag's tent, greeting her sheepishly with a "Hello?"



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

Our LotC Discord: Discord

 

As well as this if you still need help:

Check the wiki! WIKI

And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • You have not edited your application as requested.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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