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    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: any strategy or ruleset that uses outside factors to affect the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using a game to reach a shared goal through story telling and roleplaying
    Status: Denied

my name is Quadily and am an elf


Character Name: Quadily
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: chill but can get a bit tense. good shot.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for taking your time to make this application but unfortunately, your application has been...

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it. 

 Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

 

 

✦ Your biography needs lacks the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory. 

 

 

✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to have been plagiarism from another source which is highly unacceptable which will, please do check the definition and see if you can change it.
 

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

 ✦ You need at least one weakness within your interesting facts, as a character is far from a perfect being. This could be everything from their mental stability or physical weakness.

 

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin.  

 

 

 

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

 

 

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