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QuantumNova117

QuantumNova117

By QuantumNova117

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using informations outside of your characters life to use them as guideance
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do
    Status: Denied

Being shunned because of his strange looks of having a very dark form of obsidian skin, Very dark crimson eyes and black hair and being abnormally tall for his age and incredibly strong Odholu at the age of age of 17 was banished from there city for mass murder. Lived, brutally training his body to acquire incredible combat abilities became an assassin to further his abilities and training. At the age of 19 Oddholu faked his death publicly. Being assumed dead he was able to even further his training. by the age of 21 he had "eliminated" thousands of targets. at the age of 22 quit being an assassin and fled to the woods when he was caught by a bounty hunter attempting to claim the bounty that his home city had placed on him and where too lazy to remove. he stays in the forest to hide his identity while training to become the ultimate assassin.

Character Name: odholu
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: a tall dark skinned elf with dark red eyes very evil looking
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on…

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Try to avoid the use of the assassin who's killed thousands cliche. Realistically he would not have in our lore, and you've not given a reason for his being that way that makes sense in his backstory. He just randomly did it? Unlikely, try to flesh out his story and make sure to include a specific reference to server lore, as it is required. Feel free to consult our WIKI

 

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